You've got more interesting stuff going on here than most metalcore/melodeath bands, especially in the opening riff which I loved. That said, breakdowns essentially always bore me so they did nothing to help my opinion of the piece. The vocals weren't bad, but some low-pitched clean vocals could sound very good. I also liked the dissonance near the end, I highly suggest making more use of that - especially to brighten up the breakdowns. This honestly reminds me a little bit of late Nevermore, so I think if you were to change the breakdowns to more of a traditional death metal feel and put in some more high-pitched lead guitar in at the chorus you'd be well on your way to really standing out. It's a genre awash with bog-standard material, but this suggests to me that your band has capabilities that can be exercised well.
I'm not much of a musician or a music reviewer, but this is just my impression.